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Jane
is 15% done
I don’t like it so far. I don’t like time travel, I don’t like how much explanation goes into a simple thing. You can say a hallway is dark and damp without explaining the wall texture and the history and the lighting. I found myself saying “who cares?!” Out loud.. a lot.
— May 01, 2024 07:11AM
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Jane
is 23% done
Why so much detail. You could just say the clothes are black and ill fitting? Why these long descriptive paragraphs that fill up an entire page on mundane things?!
Also, I guess this book was written in a time of heightened societal issues. Just checking off the boxes.
— May 02, 2024 08:52AM
Also, I guess this book was written in a time of heightened societal issues. Just checking off the boxes.
