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No really who talks like this irl

I'm sorry, but who says to an acquaintance "i can date you, no matter how much I want to know what would it be like to sink into that sweet heat". Ew

Sooooo she moped up vomit and put the mop and backet back into the closet, without using water mind you, should I just dnf now

I don't care for historical accuracy, just use the word clit. Not "nubbin" 😭

Well if I was the FMC I would hate the MMC too so far he's coming off as 100% asshole

Why is lawyer putting people behind bars? I'm fairly only prosecutors can bring jail charge

"Condom - he says, my breast still in his mouth". What is even this scenario

You are not like other girls or you look better without make up - are not good compliments. I was enjoying the MMC, why the author had to do him dirty like that

Wtf. They just forcefully moved her in with MMC while she's disabled due to accident and can't leave on her own.

MMC once again absolutely ignores FMCs boundries on physical contact (while she's in hospital with multiple bonebreaks and jaw wired shut). My blood pressure is rising. Also people who are supposed to be on her side are not supporting her. I wanted a book with good long grovel, not once again be reading how FMC gets browbeatten into forgiving the MMC

So MMC is an asshole and doesn't know what consent is. Fun.

FMC got upset over what a guy said (that was mildly douchy) and threw a heeled show at his head. This is not an OK behavior!!! So far not a fan

I find myself putoff by the fact that author chose to add some prudishness into FMCs upbringing it doesn't match the overall DnD adventuring vibe of no dress code and no one usually bats and eye if a mixed gender adventuring party sleeps in thr same room. I don't remember purity culture being part of Exandria. Sleep alone in the woods with 5 male guards ok, sleep in a house of 1 man "omg what would people think"

Just started and I dont think that how kids talk

So FMC finds a that some strange man is sleeping in her bed (while she's alone in the house with her grandma). She understandably gets scared, but then turns on the light and the man is hot, so she is no longer scared and gets aroused.

Not a promising start

Why are you announcing that you are fakedating on social media? Doesn't it defeat the purpose

So far both MCs are miserable assholes, I really need some characters growth and romance to start soon

FMC has never come from sex with man, until the magical MMC come along. It's like a modern day version of virginal FMC

Breakfast sandwich is not an appropriate apology for standing a woman up and purposely ignoring her calls. Ones again FMC forgives without proper grovel

Sometimes, the dialog is written is so self-serving it becomes cringy. The only way it could have been made worse if author added "and then everyone clapped"

I'm sorry but why a nurse is convinced that having unprotected sex is completely safe, because her period just ended

Conor is the worst and I dont think it's on purpose

"any friend of that dreadful, pushy female" I may be nitpicky, but this line of thinking completely turns me off the character. And I'm pretty sure the author is actually trying to portray him as a standup guy

I would like the book a lot more if the author didn't spend so much time judging women's appearances. The heavy makeup, the short dresses, the tight tops all worn by rude or unpleasant woman.

Nooo, why you must pick "baby girl" as a pet name. Kindle really needs the "find and replace" function

I'm really disliking the mmc if he doesn't want to interact with the woman how about he leaves her alone instead of insulting her and using her work as a service worker to force her to listen

"We were all dumbstruck by pussy when we joined the league. It’s everywhere. You’ll see. But damn, when you find the right one, it’s heaven -
he says, staring at a picture of his wife on his phone"

That's how you see your wife? Really?

Must we ignore boundries just because it's omegaverse setting?

I'm sorry but what sort of adult hides candy wrappers between couch cushions, that's just gross

I don't know why but I always find it cringy and unrealistic when FMC conveniently overhears someone praising her (usually the mmc). It's up there with "oops did I just said my thoughts out loud in a 2 minute monolog" trope