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I think I’m going to finally make the move over to TheStoryGraph. I’ll check GR but TSG will have my updates. Add me if you’d like!

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Skipped creepy pasta, the story didn’t sound interesting to me at all

Dreadful things - 3/5 this was just ok. It was extremely cliche and predictable. It’s literally just a fake dating trope, the fact he’s a monster was unimportant and could have been fleshed out more. I also just really don’t like fake dating. So…

Monster of Darkspell Comics - 0/5 this was almost comically bad. I have never read anything with this many typos ever. I cannot express how bad the typos were in this. It’s like not a single person read this before getting put into this anthology. Not even the author. The main characters didn’t seem to interact with each other and the suddenly they’re on love. You get no explanation of anything. It’s just bad

Play - 2/5 this one made me so mad!!! The concept was so amazing but the execution was so confusing. This 100% needed to be a more flushed out story, a full length novel is needed to do this story justice. Everything was just breezed through, you don’t even realize what the point is. I’m still not even sure I understand the concept of the vhs tapes.

Fed after midnight - 4/5 this one actually had depth to it. This one also should have just been it’s own standalone. Literally just gremlins porn but they’re not fuzzy little guys, they’re humans who turn into ogres? Idk, the details were a little glossed over towards the end.

Lost and Found - 2/5 this needed waaaaaaay more meat to the story. Everything felt extremely rushed and surface level. The love interest is way too complacent with the happenings in this story.

Frankie’s Funhouse - 3/5 another author I’m familiar with. This was literally just gorey FNAF porn? So I guess do what you will with that information. It was too open ended for me to really enjoy it. Would have preferred an epilogue or a more solid ending.

Updating as I go since this is over a thousand pages. I want to write down thoughts before I forget.

Playing Mantis - I just don’t like Clio’s writing. Every book I’ve read has been a huge let down since she writes things that I really enjoy. But her writing is so subpar.

I stand by my previous statement. This REALLY didn’t need to be 600 pages

Oh my god this is so slow, Lily I don’t think 600 pages was necessary

The internet made me read it