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I was at page 127 when I realized I did not really like this book. The book was pleasant. Nothing particularly bad about it, but also nothing good. It was weak, bland, and forgettable. So that is what I am going to do, forget about it. Life is too short to waste it on bland fair like this.

Just read enough to remember that I didn't like part one.

The story wasn't going anywhere and the sex scenes read like a 12 year old virgin boy wrote them. The only thing in the book that I liked was.........Well...........Oh, yes! That was why I stopped reading it. There wasn't anything about the book that I liked.

Did not like a single character in this book. No point in reading farther.

Didn't take long to determine that this story isn't for me. Bad unimaginative writer who apparently has no idea how to build even two dimensional characters. It is like listening to a drunk friend try to tell you about the movie he watched last month. I would have to be paid, to finish this mess.

Very hard going in the beginning. Story jumped around in confusing ways with little from the author to help figure out WTF was going on. It finally got interesting until I discovered that the author was going to crap long and hard on the protagonist to try to make us feel for him. But I hate this cheap old writers trick. Better to write an interesting story instead. Gave up and tossed out.

Found it extremely uninteresting reading, so onto the scrapheap it went.

The book lost my interest and I tossed it out. Same old story, told in the same old way.

It was dragging along far too slowly and holding too tightly to any character development. I got bored and gave up on it as a waste of my time.