jerry smith’s Reviews > Stone Will > Status Update
jerry smith
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Very hard going in the beginning. Story jumped around in confusing ways with little from the author to help figure out WTF was going on. It finally got interesting until I discovered that the author was going to crap long and hard on the protagonist to try to make us feel for him. But I hate this cheap old writers trick. Better to write an interesting story instead. Gave up and tossed out.
— May 23, 2020 12:03AM
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