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Also, the book being narrated in third person is not doing it for me. I usually don't mind but for this book where I already have no connection with the characters the third person narrator is not working

The thing is I don't think I like Cassandra, she sounds like a stubborn woman that threw a tantrum years ago and that's why she got kicked out of the bookshop. I mean, I know she was a thief but why? like there has not been any redeeming quality for her. And then Lowell he's like brooding but no in the interesting way more like, what's up your ass

I think when authors need to reach the smut quota... like the whole epilogue feels like a 'Ah! I forgot add smut let me sprinkle it at the end..."

She's in the hospital while he's surfing. When do I start liking this dude? And his friend the OBGYN is a creep...

I'm... I feel... conflicted? No, confused. So she asks him to man up and the way he decides to do is to fuck her? Dude the whole city knows you know how to fuck, that's not... OMG this is awful...