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The pacing of this book is terrible and I can’t seem to get into it at all. I may have to start skimming until something happens.

Mary Sue trash. DNF.

DNF. Boring.

So a little girl is brought back to life and Cas is DTF… I hardly think that was the appropriate response to a miracle. My eyes rolled so hard I hurt myself.

Also… does the author know what coño actually means?

The virtue signaling in this book… 🙄🙄

This continued mention of gills when referring to the selkie is mildly painful to read. Selkies in mythology were shape shifting seal people so why would they have gills? They’re still mammals that breathe air... not fish.

I do love this story but there are some glaring flaws in the logic.

For two books now Elloren has done nothing but cry. Great story but the amount of crying or “tears willing in eyes” descriptives can be incredibly annoying. I’m surprised an editor didn’t catch this.