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None of these events would have happened to be because I would’ve snooped through the entire house DAY ONE.

Great descriptions of what it’s like growing up a lonely girl

Very much giving Brontë

SO convoluted

Personally, I think stories are better when given context. Otherwise, I have no reason to care about these characters or their relationships. There are no stakes because I’ve been given no information just sitcom banter.

There’s moments of good writing, particularly in Viola’s sections, but whenever it switches to Fox’s perspective, I am immediately removed from the story. The writing style switches drastically depending on the perspective and Fox’s section are juvenile. Way too YA for my tastes. I think sticking to Violas perspective would have helped the tone and narrative a lot more.

The prelude is so bad oh god what I have done to myself

Pride month selection

I hate you Wallace