Good pacing so far. Explores new angles. Some errors. He mentions "poisonous snakes." Snakes are venomous, not poisonous. Also, the protagonist is a powerlifter. Her workout is unrealistic. No one who is going to aim for a PR on the jerk or snatch is going to do both bench and squat along with kettlebells in the same workout. Well, Crossfit people might actually do that and get hurt.
— Jan 08, 2022 07:44AM
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