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If I had the chance to revise my book I would add more transitions into the next chapter so it is not choppy. For example at the end of a chapter they would be a party then the next chapter they are at Venice beach, I believe she should add transitions so we understand more. If she did this I believe the book would be more understandable and flow better.

The book A-List is about a girl named Anna who met a boy named Ben. Ben took Anna to a wedding of a famous producer and she and Ben fell n love. Ben's friends like Cammie, Dee, and Sam are in love with Ben and they all try their hardest to break Anna and Ben up, but Anna knows what they are trying to do so she pretends it doesn't bother her.

The book A-List is about a girl named Anna who met a boy named Ben. Ben took Anna to a wedding of a famous producer and she and Ben fell n love. Ben's friends like Cammie, Dee, and Sam are in love with Ben and they all try their hardest to break Anna and Ben up, but Anna knows what they are trying to do so she pretends it doesn't bother her.

My book is similar to S.E. Hinton's book because Zoey is trying to fit in with her friends and be like one of them. This relates to the Outsiders because Cherry is a soc but wants to be a greaser and try's to fit in with them by becoming their spy.

In my book Tori and Sea were best friends all the way up till 7 grade. In 7 grade Sea became really rich and popular and definiatly different. Tori still hangs out with her even though Sea is popular. Sea has a fake boyfriend and has all the attention so Tori lies and make a fake boyfriend to, the girls are fighting and lying about their "boyfriends" to get the spotlight and be the leaders of popular people.

On page 255 the theme would be take life one step at a time and not jump to conclusions. I chose this as my theme because Zoey friends keep dying and the decetive was asking her questions but she kept jumping to conclusions about everything. Her ex boyfriend Heath went missing and she had a vision about him and she jumped to conclusions, her best friend Stevie just resited change so she died, zoey went to conclusions

This book is really catching my attention. Whenever I have a chance I will read, this past week I have not had a chance to really sit down and read because I was busy. Zoey just had her first full moon ritual and Erik bought her a gorgeous black with silver sparkle dress to go with the occasion. Zoeys friends found out they all have an affinity for power such as Earth, water, fire etc. Zoey saw her ex boyfriend.