this prose really is beautiful and super evocative at times, but it's kinda doing too much all at once.
Like this: "She'd done nothing but be very nice to a triptych of cows. The logistics of being a folkloric horror were very daunting." Did we really need "triptych"? Why is that sentence calling so much attention to itself when it should step aside for the next one?
— Nov 21, 2025 09:33AM
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