This book does need editing.
The character of Richard quite unbelievable. He is apparently 10 (or 11) but the description of his behaviour is more like that of a 6 year old. Why are the boys home schooled? Why is the family so socially isolated when it seems they live within walking distance of the village.
So far, the book has no explanation for any of this. I don't think I will make it to the end.....
— May 26, 2017 08:35PM
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