This started out promising, but is suffering from a need for a good developmental editor or first rate beta. Inconsistencies and continuity errors are killing it for me, and minor proofreading issues that don't bother me. I needed a really good, easy read, and this is making my brain hurt. Maybe I'll try again later, cause it does have some potential for hot hate sex, but DNF'ing for now.
— May 24, 2019 12:15PM
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