Great so far! Fast pace, plot coming together, interesting relationships. But why are all the characters teenagers? I get hardships make you grow up quickly, but they don't talk, act or read as teenagers at all. It seems unnecessary. I think I'd find it more believable if they were at least a few years older. As it is, every time someone's age gets mentioned I'm "Huh? ...oh, right".
— Jan 17, 2023 08:02AM
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