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Most overused phrase: "her heart swelled with [love/affection/gratitude]". Seriously, in one sex scene it's twice on one page. Other than that, the book is okay, but a little too nice. So far, the only drama is an accident, but never fret: no lives were endangered while writing this book.
— Feb 07, 2023 11:45AM
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Collaroy
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Haha! I thought this was figure skating- turns out it's hockey. Should read review more closely. :D Considering the MCs are supposed to have been legendary rivals, they both seem to be very chill with being thrown together. It's early so let's see what happens, but so far the book could use some more drama.
— Feb 04, 2023 01:46PM
