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I am listening to the audio. The tone the narrator uses for the FMC is quite possibly the most annoying thing I’ve ever heard. In addition the FMC is really really annoying, the island gossip is really annoying and even though some of the male characters aren’t as annoying, the FMC is so juvenile, and bratty, it’s beyond annoying I will not continue the series.

Goodness this could have used an editor, even a spellcheck would have caught a lot of the problems. The FMC is just naive beyond anything I have ever read and the stuttering without acknowledging that she has a stutter when she’s nervous or something is annoying. Constantly crying as well, I’m not sure I’m going to make it through, 35% and they are barely mentioning Granny’s murder.

I rarely DNF a book, I’m a mood reader, so I typically do honk I will come back to this at some point when the mood strikes. This one I won’t be coming back to, some other reviewers mentioned a lot of superfluous scenes, and they’re right, but also a lot of repetitive dialogue/thoughts which then causes things to happen seemingly out of nowhere with zero lead up or indication, as well as things you never read