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Absolutely not! Who is this Megan girl??? I don’t like this already.

I love supporting and reading works by Christian authors. But this book seriously needs copy editing, line editing, and proofreading. The main character is named Amy, but there are whole chapters where her name is.Any.

This is the Christian spider-Man and I am really enjoying it

This is the Christian magic treehouse book series! I’m so excited to be reading this tale, but I also have some points of constructive criticism to grow this book series. Praying that the author connects with a bomb Christian developmental editor as they continue this series!

This is why you don’t idolize people. She so prideful though. It’s ugly.

This girl so prideful

I hate this first person passed hits the most! It should be written in present tense!

They’re making such a big fuss about keeping the Sabbath day holy when Sunday isn’t even the sad day! That’s the funny part

I’m sure the dead husband went from Daniel to Derick 🤣🤣🤣

This story has so many plot holes! And because it’s a series the plot holes go across the books. For example, what is the age difference between these people? When did the dad have another kid? How did she find out about him? And if the dad knew about him, why did he leave him in foster care? Maybe some of these will be answered if I finish the book but I’m just like please fill these holes!

The timelines and storylines of these books from one book to another is so disjointed. How did Mia go from being a redhead who Ross and Kenley nicknamed “red” to a woman with black hair? how is Kenley when she was subscribed as an elementary school kid? Way more than three years have passed in the storyline and things are so disconnected. I found myself really not enjoying this author.

I really don’t like Layla. Bald head girl makes me sick

Layla is hard headed and disobedient. Girl! Learn to trust somebody! Getting folks in trouble

This book is full of false advertising! It’s supposed to be clean wholesome. These folks is not clean. They custom. And the only reason they haven’t had sex is because they keep getting interrupted. The only reason I’m still reading this is because it has not been explicitly sexual as of yet. But I’m about ready to throw this whole series and author in the trashcan.

Juliet is an idiot

I’ve never been so ready for a book to end. I’m so over this story.

This boy really is dumb. How you forget info you were JUST told. Dummy

Jason is an idiot and impatient

Jason trusts all the wrong people

This book is so freaking good. I can’t wait for MBots first foray into battle

If Ozrik doesn’t get to blind with this dragon I’m f going to cry

This book is so stinking good!!! I love stories highlighting disabilities. I need a thousand of these stories

“The aunts said I can keep you!” This was priceless

This writing Tis 30% terrible. Author could use developmental editing

Spader has been to Zaada before

Mardy was a gram on the first book.

Have I mentioned how much I hate Courtney?

Courtni is so stupid. I really hate her. I wish she was the one that went missing.. It Allison makes more sense for her to be the dummy. The Mrs. at the whole timeline. Did Mark to be the dummy who messes up the whole timeline

The first domino already feel. These kids are so so slow.

Courtni is a terrible person