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As a professional chef this gave me a new kink. So thank you for that.

It's a fantasy you've got mail and I don't hate that

So far this is the funniest thing I've read in a while.

"I don't wanna live in a world where my arms can leave me"

I am sold

We are finally getting answers, but at what cost

Does lor actually try to explain how she is feeling or is she just going to make everyone assume stuff then get mad when they are wrong?

Something irks me and I can't place what that is. The story isn't bad but something is making it really hard for me to read. Maybe if I listen to the audio book instead

It is an interesting premise and I am enjoying it. The cat donut being hysterical. I am an amateur gamer and DND player. I know the stats and info are essential to games. I feel that the story so far goes too far into explaining what every loot box, move, and stat means. Even for people who have never played anything would be able to understand the basics. At least I think so. Could be a me thing

Have the dashes gotten better? No. But the story has gotten good enough so I can ignore the dashes because despite things that have happened so far (iykyk) the characters are delightful.

I don't know if I can keep reading. I've barely started and already the extensive use of dashes in interrupt sentences is driving me nuts.i am reading it on my phone and it happens three times on the same page. I don't want to know what would happen if I had the physical book. Quicksilver had italics, this book as dashes. Why are authors overusing these grammatical devices? I don't know but please. Stop.

Still very slow going. It's getting more interesting but the characters still feel flat to me. Half way through and I should be more invested. I'm going to try and finish. The best part is seeing gemstones and crystals actually do what people say/believe that they do.

I'm starting to enjoy this much more, although the time hopping can be disorienting. It only goes back when something needs to be explained, and I find that it doesn't add much beyond exposition. While I don't mind it as much, it does become tiresome and predictable after a while

So the prologue takes place in time after the first chapter? obviously I am in the beginning but honestly it hasn't hooked me yet