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Atlgyrl is 35% done with If I Break (If I Break, #1)
A third of the way in, and I’m kind of bored. I understand where the characters are, but have no good idea why they stay. The flashbacks don’t move quick enough, and there’s all this emotion I can objectively appreciate, but I’m not connected to it. At this point, I’m more frustrated with the narrator than sympathetic.
Nov 26, 2025 02:46AM Add a comment
If I Break (If I Break, #1)

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