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Well this is adorable

This story has too many side characters that I don't care about at all.

Oooh I really like Patrick!

I like this a lot so far. The pacing is fantastic. I have been surprised multiple times by things that have happened. Thoroughly enjoying myself and I feel like I'm going to fly through this.

Nope. Can't do it.

I fear I don't like this 😬 my biggest grievance so far is that she is summarizing dialogue. Like midway through a scene, she stops writing out dialogue between the characters and there is just a paragraph of summary of the interaction.

On the other hand, the dialogue that does exist is with very stiff or very cringey.

Torj is deeply miserable from all the yearning. I love it.

I'm so excited to see Torj again!!!! And Wren too.

This is so good so far! I want to binge it but I'm trying to savor it.

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