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This is the hero??

I've never given up a book in the first few pages but this is really pushing it

..... This isn't consent

OK, the only one I don't want to meet the pointy end of a knife is julien.

I really, really, really want to jam a pointy kitchen utensil into Amir's throat.

The think I'm finding really out there is the fact it's set in London and they seem to never have a jacket on. Please, even in summer we need layers as it gets later

The new love of her life gets arrested for assault and she's still not filling a police report?

Whyyyyy is she so fu**ing stupid when it's mentioned at least 10 times a chapter that she graduated harvard?

And! Still not went to the police!

I can't stand weak women in literature

She's basically a giant bruise and his way of 'healing' her is an, orgasm!?

I. Can't. Quit. This. Close. To. The. End

Wait. She gets attacked by her psycho ex and its her that's comforting him.

Damn, he's a keeper.

I swear to god she better report this to the police!!

So in under 2 weeks the h falls for the manwhore H, OK, I can get passed that. Quick, but OK. What I can't get passed is the fact that 1 page ago she was avoiding him like the plague and now she wants him to "replace him with you. Right now."

Htfg I cannot be dealing with this rn

Sooo she's got a this expensive furniture and a storage unit full of more expensive furniture that she's no sold even though she's desperate...

Again. Weak af heroine

"You need to get laid, do me and my brothers a favor, find it off Chaos. And you throw Chaos’s help in our face, that’s your call,” he clipped. “But you do that shit, you’re a fool.”

I mean, yeah d*ck move but she basically tried to thank him with sex... What has this women got about trying to prostitute herself

The reviews for this swayed me into reading but honestly, wtf. The general idea is solid, but the execution is flawed.

I can already tell the heroine is weak af.

And btw, who decideds to s*ck d before pawing jewelry bought by your cheating ex husband who's trying to take your child from you.

OK, it's, like the first chapter. And already I'm Underwhelmed. A stink bomb? Really
Wow, creative

knew she had to be a little bit wet right now. The thought practically made me groan, and I couldn’t hold back any longer.

Decision made.

Gripping her tight, I brought my mouth to hers and kissed her hungrily. When our lips met, I heard her make a tiny sound. Her body went rigid, and she wasn’t reciprocating.
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Andddd that's enough of that.

“I don’t want you calling me unless it’s work related,” she said in defeat.

My devious smile told her I had absolutely no intention of sticking to that rule.

“Oh, I wouldn’t dream of it,” I purred, lazily scanning her figure.
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I want to throw the 'hero' off a building. Yeah, I don't know if I m gonna finish this

Her heart was racing. “Is your heart beating fast because you like it when I touch you or because you don’t?”

Because you've locked her in a small space with you and now your physically crowding her!? Creeper that you are 🙄

Sooooooo the 'Hero' acknowledges the she has a phobia of social situations and thinks the correct response to that is to lock them both in a lift?

Swoon (insert eye roll) (insert eye roll for me writing, insert eye roll)

Forgot why I stopped reading this when everyone else seems to love it, 2 pages in and I'm reminded. I understand the use of repetition but damn, enough is enough

I kind of feel skeevy whenever the hero calls the heroine 'kiddo' like dude there's not that big an age gap. Kind of hoping that when they take a romantic turn he stops

She was here for a press mention, which meant that Hollywood had eaten my Cinderella and spit out this put-together blonde carbon copy.

I moved through the tables and sat down across from her. I eyed her tits, and decided that if I made it through the lunch, I’d grant her a quick screw, then never look at her again.

... Wtf!

So far I hate it. What even is this?!

So far this is the biggest let down, don't think I'll finish.

Right I let it go when shhe was eating a taco and 2 lines later it was a burger but if she's had a dramatic hair cut (I.e Veronica Mars) how the f*ck is it swishing off her back when she has it in a high pony tail....

Tiny little inconsistencies that really take you out of the story

Greta, who was at least sixty, but looked fifty because she was a yoga fanatic, had great skin, and looked after herself, nodded. “Mmmm, total deliciousness.”

Loads of absolutely useless information and I'm only on ch2

Tbh I'm struggling with this one. I usually devour everything written by this author because it's amazing but and it hurts my soul to write this, I'm not enjoying this book.

“And can you tell me who NEVER suffers from depression?” Right on cue, hundreds of voices cry out. “Bitches!” “That’s RIGHT!” I roar. “Bitches never suffer from depression!


Really? I'm legit the biggest bitch you will come across (ask my mummy..) and this is bullshit. Really gonna say strong women can't suffer from depression...

"I might have cerebrospinal fluid leak, especially because it’s only coming from one side of my nose.”

Knew it