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Right I let it go when shhe was eating a taco and 2 lines later it was a burger but if she's had a dramatic hair cut (I.e Veronica Mars) how the f*ck is it swishing off her back when she has it in a high pony tail....
Tiny little inconsistencies that really take you out of the story
— Feb 11, 2020 12:24PM
Tiny little inconsistencies that really take you out of the story

