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Just saw the trailer for the Off Campus series and omg yep, time to read them.

No words.

Ok, does Hayes live in a house or an apartment cos I'm so Goddamn confused now. I'm preserving cos that's the type of person I am but I don't know what's what anymore.
And when did it go from Kieran being under lock and key with Hayes to him being back at his own place like that whole part was missed.

???????

How many more times does Hayes have to say he is thirty-six years old.

And when it says those two words... um half the time it's actually 3 words being written

Quite disappointed with this read

Kieran went from sitting window seat, to aisle seat in a matter of pages?
Needs to be edited majorly.
I had been looking forward to this book for ages. Editing issues can be a turn off