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Enjoying this book, I actually like it!
Hmm but it did sprinkle some bad language in. :( - pg rating
Totally channeling some tosher and Brandon Sanderson vibes.

Ummm.. not sure.

Has inappropriate language, abusive life, tragic occurrences. As it a pg13 rating and probably mostly adult audiences.

Not as clean as I was hoping. Adventure, music and stories so far.

I get lost at times, unsure if its a flash back or skipped forward in time. Also, it's a bit verbose in places- using several synynyms of a word in a paragraph, joking among the friends being detailed too often for my taste.
I get confused by the different names as well, which race, group, person etc is being talked about.
Just needs some editing, word removal, tightening and tidying.
I'd like a glossary.