The author is trying to create suspicion and fear in an obvious and not very smooth way. The writing is like someone made chatgpt read Wattpad books written by teens of the 2010's and spit out whatever it is I'm currently reading.
Don't get me wrong, if I was in MC's shoes right now I'd be scared. But that's how bad he writing is. Instead of making me believe the situation is scary, I believe the MC is overreacting
— Feb 18, 2026 04:44AM
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