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Ayla deft is has some form of prehistoric adhd

Aw man I thought the downed bridge would have more impact

BRUTAL to have them walk up a HILL

“Fearful enigmas” I both love and hate this dialogue

An otter bag where the flap is the head of said otter is a truly horrifying image

This child
Is so precocious
But I do not think this was done on purpose

“She woke up screaming!” So this is the kind of prose
With the exclamation
Okay

Getting “the girl who loved tom Gordon” vibes

The concept of just, a random ass hole swallowing this tiny hut place and then closing is a choice for a beginning setup, this is quite funny

I love how Glen keeps calling Stu “east Texas”

Mitochondrial
Network

“Sometimes the only way to win a game was to make the pieces think they are the one playing it”

This sketch Godlike AI

Interesting that we get a pov of mother Abigail too?

Was is it with King and slapping women in this book?!

“There was an air of a first attempt about Seth”

What an absolute burn, this poor man

This
This man is just junkrat from overwatch

Getting some massive Junkrat vibes with this Trashcan man character, and I am literally in the page where he gets introduced

This man is so gross please sir stop this

Oh no is this a fatphobia character

Oh no, Harold is giving me teenager Severus Snape vibes and that is not a good thing whatsoever

“ her wedding dress still hung in the closet, unworn.”

King you don’t *have* to bring the feels like that

Oh no I kind of love this agent of chaos villain already

I do love that this fictional pandemic was partly exacerbated by someone trying to avoid quarantine, classic

Oh no it is a constantly shifting virus

“He was trying to find some sort of key that would make everything clear and explain how you could butt yourself against stone walls for six long years, playing the clubs, making demo tapes, doing sessions, the whole bit, and then suddenly make it in nine weeks.” Is this man a PhD student

Oh my god Frannie is so absolutely despicable. Is this book's appeal the desire to want most of the characters struck by the plague and rejoicing when they do or

Fran why do you outline marrying as one of the options and then IMMEDIATELY say you don’t want it after he takes you up on it? Hope this character gets plagued, she is so annoying

Was it really necessary to have an extended scene of a girl bitting her tongue so hard she spits blood for like three pages? Is this part of the previously deleted content absolutely so crucial for the story it was added back in or


In other comments, reading this post pandemic is sure going to be interesting

When looking for some Halloween horror stories I can say I was not ready for one about a PSYCHIC INCEL wtf was this story, fully still processing this