Wholy over describing, I love what they are trying to do with this book but the over description of people and rooms I feel like my old English teacher yelling “SHOW DONT TELL”
Its a little hard to read because I keep wanting to fix things where instead of stating the floor and walls are cobbled stone say the cobble stone floors bled up on to the was of the octangular shaped room idk I’m spitballing here
— Dec 09, 2025 04:25AM
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