Did the author write this when they were 16 years old? Because it really seems like they wrote this when they were 16 years old. This is a 16 year old, talking about a grown ass man leaving her "at the dance" ... like, what? It's increasingly hard to suspend disbelief. And are we supposed to give him kudos that he's trying "not to give in." No! Fuck no, NO KUDOS! She's 16! That's fucking gross!!! Legit nauseating.
— Nov 07, 2025 08:21PM
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