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Ok, this is irksome… Sugar is book 3 and Tender is book 4, but we’re getting spoilers about book 4 already. It’s like reading Pretty Boy, which is 1.5, but really ought to be read *after* book 2… Lindsey, do better arranging your stories.

I haven’t been this pissed off reading a book in a long time. At first, it was the overprotective brother cock-blocking his baby brother. Now it’s the other MC.

Rakesh is a 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Egon deserves so much better…

This is becoming a hate read … pity, because I loved the first book …

DNFing for too many stupid mistakes. It’s cute enough, but between the meh premise of 2 insanely rich people courting and my having gotten spoiled with actual proofreading, I just can’t.

The formatting in this book is so screwed up. Multiple hard breaks in the middle of sentences. No breaks between dialogue. It’s making it difficult to stay in the story. Unnecessary indentations. This file needs to be dumped into an ascii text program and dumped back into whatever word processor was used to reformat it cleanly. Yikes!

Nope.

Are any of the characters actually likable?

Oooh, that reference didn’t age well…

Ok, so maybe I’ve reached the crisis point, but it’s hitting close to home

One chapter in and I’m feeling sorry for the assassin 🤣

I’ve tried. I got halfway through, but I really don’t care about any of the main characters. Also, the pacing is just weird. I know kink relationships move fast, but this is ridiculous.

The prose seems bland and the dialog leaden.