I don't know what to make of this book which is a shame b/c I'm not far in. For a PR package I'm shocked at the amount of errors. "Quick as a flash, Xavier has Malachi's throat grasped in his daughter." and "He tips his head back and runs his tongue along the vein in Malachai's neck." WHO??? It is explained farther down but this is bad. I expect better editing from Entangled.
— Aug 12, 2025 10:26AM
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