My thoughts so far are that the book isn’t poorly written, but it’s failing to grab me. I feel like I’m not a part of the story, but am just witnessing it. For example, when we’re told Sydney is holding off a panic attack, it’s simply stated. I have panic attacks and I feel like my ideal book would draw me in and make me feel as if I was there with Sydney, struggling to get the words out, bathed in fear.
— Feb 11, 2026 01:23PM
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