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Siren sexually assaulted the MMC. He was drunk. He told her no multiple times. He was too drunk to consent.

Pretty sure this is AI

The time lines are all off. Her divorce was 11 months ago but she found out about her husbands pregnant mistress 7 months ago.

Miles dad died 3 years ago but his mom 2 years ago but the dad outlived the mom.

Also he has been out of work for 3 months because his parents died but they died years ago?

Good book. Timeline is a bit rushed. All this therapy and healing should have taken months. Not A month. No one is going to therapy everyday unless you are in outpatient therapy.

I agree with the other reviews - Aiden was sexually assaulted.

The end of Chapter 17 is a bit of a mess. Missing dialogue and a repeat of a few paragraphs.

So you are telling me an40 year old woman who hasn’t waitresses since college and has been in a corporate job can spend 8 hours waitressing in stiletto heels?

Yeah no.


So a crazy lady is pounding on the window and the FMC has time to pull on undies but can’t take the time to pull on some sweatpants as well?

This seems to be a theme with the authors books. The FMC starts out as a pretty unique character but they all seem to evolve into a very generic super sexy woman - and all of the FMCs characteristics go out the window.

And the FMC has no problem assimilating from prison to a penthouse?

Loved loved the beginning. Such a cool idea with being possessed.

Really like Ellie

It’s nice to have a character that is pragmatic and is consistent.

Ok - you can’t portray Ellie as a back county girl who hates to wear shoes to suddenly wearing heals and stilettos and makeup.

One thing that grinds my gears is how the characters with psychic abilities KNOW what kinds of psychic abilities are fake. “No one can tell the future. Anyone who says they can is a fraud.” HOW do they know this? Especially when people without psychic abilities don’t believe in psychic abilities. How do the main characters know only certain psychic abilities exist?

Reading a few reviews - there was so much opportunity to dive into other issues and relationships between already established characters. But all that page space is wasted on nothing.

Someone said - someone muttered - somebody else chimes in, - why the hell doesn’t Ward actually put names to who is saying what when the brothers are together. It’s so annoying and dumb and lazy.

Again the hate for Havers. I don’t know why Ward has such a beef with him, but he always gets treated so badly. His suggestion was valid - Jane and V getting all holier than thou about it just makes me roll my eyes so damn hard.

And once again Ward can’t keep physical characteristics straight. When Butch transitioned it was noted he was taller than V. Now in this book V is taller than Butch.

Assail’s speech pattern is throwing me off completely. It is so different than what it was in the previous books. I really wish Ward was more consistent with her characters. Just like Payne - her speech pattern completely changed from one book to the next. Annoys the hell out of me.