I am enjoying it as it ends. Now that it’s all starting to come together, I’m like ‘ahhh, all makes sense!’ Anyways, I wanted a little more out of it, I think maybe a little more focus on the relationship with David, although I guess you could argue is the biggest indicator that she didn’t love him enough, but I don’t know, I just feel it doesn’t work for the reader, or least me lmao, to feel confused.
— Oct 03, 2025 03:52PM
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