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I like the book so far, although I have noticed an editing problem. When Arizona finds her sister dead, after she calls the cops and leaves the motel, she stops in a parking lot and calls her boss to fill him in on what has happened and what she has done. The later in the story while she is talking to Razor, he ask if she has updated her boss and she said no, calls him and fills him in on the same information.

OK, so the book was ok. The secondbook I liked better, but the are some mistakes when Tara and Felicity are talking about the pregnancy. When Felicity is talking to Tara, sometimes she calls her Felicity. I had to go back and reread I a couple of times just to make sure I was following the conversation.