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Janie
Janie is on page 102 of 212
I like the book so far, although I have noticed an editing problem. When Arizona finds her sister dead, after she calls the cops and leaves the motel, she stops in a parking lot and calls her boss to fill him in on what has happened and what she has done. The later in the story while she is talking to Razor, he ask if she has updated her boss and she said no, calls him and fills him in on the same information.
Jul 12, 2020 08:15AM
Protecting Arizona (Special Forces: Operation Alpha) (The Protectors Book 4)

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