this reads a little bit like tumblr prose lol intro of on earth we were gorgeous left me breathless and it’s hard not to compare the two. we have passages like:
“Mornings, when the light rinses this place the shade of oatmeal,”
and
“When the prehistoric glaciers melted, the valley became a world-sized lake” ?😭
i know it’s too early to judge this hard but the first page is the most important imo
— Oct 02, 2025 10:11PM
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