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Will feels more and more like a character created to be a company for Nico, and not his own character, which, to be honest, is kind of what happened, but I think we could use a lil more time trying to make him more complex and not just a silly guy who helps Nico when needed.

This feels so much more juvenile than what a YA should be.
They tell you there is racism in the military, but every time you see it, there's always a white person who "makes it right". The protagonists have no prejudice of their own, of course, so it just feels flat.
The romance is very clichê, of course , the black soldier will fall in love with the white girl.
And I hate Aphrodite

I kinda hate the way Aphrodite talks

Interesting

Next chapter's name is "Man Down"
Patroclos, my boy, is that you

This is so insanely good