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the scene between Jerry and this Dr Fell is a very creepy, scary moment in story has all the elements of suspenseful horror....like Hansel and Gretel or The three Billy-Goats Gruff, that troll still is the creepiest thing ever, but children's stories Right? The wolf in Peter and The Wolf was scary and when its killed at the end it's corpse is taken away on a spit. This story harken these old stories in a new way.

I like how the ominous, yet siren song of the play structure evolves, its almost like a premonition of addiction or what can happen to society like experimenting with rats. I want to say more about this doctor Fell but I don't want to ruin story for others. He is a scary mage.

the doctor appointment and the obsession with the playhouse and jungle gym by the children is fascinating. kids always want to get advantage over their parents and see what is populat no matter what it is. Dr Fell is very witchy to me and I don't trust him. Reminds me of professor Harold Hill and

This Dr Fell I don't trust so far. but he is very enchanting in a way, adorable but something is off with this guy and he scare me and I am 54.

I am re reading this again. my own book, this is so much fun. but grueling and hard work. finally all the kinks have been worked out.

not very far yet, but I like the evolving emotion of Fate the main character and this whole seedy brothel in snow and icy winter that she wants to escape and take her brother with her but that might cost her

I wrote the book The Snake Dragons about an outlaw named Desiderio in a dark medieval world, where he experiences romance and faces great monsters, while trying to find meaning in his mysterious life, while in this mysterious world. he must help King Merle and recover the Last Breath that was stolen from a Tomb. and Desiderio is possessed by a beautiful siren witch. its on Kindle. its hard writing a book, 1st time!

I wrote the story about Desiderio in a dark medieval world where he has romance and faces great monsters while trying to find meaning in his mysterious life, while in this mysterious world. he must help King Merle and recover the Last Breath that was stolen from a Tomb. and he is possessed by a beautiful siren witch.

the book I wrote and published on amazon has my author page now and biography on the same page with my book The Snake Dragons: The Last Breath World Of Purg display and price for softback and Kindle versions. I am excited about this...