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i’m liking this. it’s cute. it’s funny. however. while there is a plot, it feels like it’s being thrown aside for over-written and way-too-long scenes about tasting wine. and i get it, jess is getting to know austin but do these specific scenes need to be THAT long. i want more lore and drama bc the worldbuilding is interesting

okay like. ???? why the pov from niamh here? and why write that in 3rd person if the main pov is in 1st like why not write the entire book in 3rd???????

okay idk what it is but the plot so far is so annoying and all the characters are irritating me and i really don’t know why we need mercy’s pov. this series should’ve been in 3rd person tbh.

you know i was expecting grace to immediately go to tartarus to get this shit over with for a dramatic saving of the world but ever since gaia opened that pit in the LAST book it’s just been so much thumb twiddling and dare coddling her and it’s so fucking irritating

this book did not see an editor. there are so many typos in here compared to the others. names misspelled, “first grip” rather than firm grip. whew.

it’s starting to irk me that every gang has a name except “the mexicans” and that’s the only way they’re referred to as CONSTANTLY

i am obsessed with this book so far