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i’m finally starting this and the writing is lovely. i have no idea where this book is leading me but the concept behind this pawnshop, there’s something powerful to be said and studied here. it seems so far that people are trading the memory of painful choices. but there’s humanity in having them, no? that the absence of them is carving out a part of you that makes you whole. many thoughts for this already.

the grammar and formatting in this is egregious. why do we keep adding the dialogue of two different characters in the same paragraph. this book reads like middle-grade fiction but even middle-grade fiction can have good writing styles. this author just can’t write. garbage.