[THIS WAS/IS ALL MY FAULT]
Every time Ella says/thinks this it pulls me out of the story...I get the reality of feeling this way but it should EITHER spur the main character to fight or give up....more than that it becomes redundant....I only need to be there once or twice, but the repetition (AND IT's OVER & OVER & OVER AGAIN)..it's distracting from the story.
It's hard and Ella's the first...GOT IT...let's get it!
— Aug 10, 2024 02:31PM
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