So far the writing style in this book has been very amateurish, even the dialogues. Like what do you mean "construction workers wearing stupid yellow hats"?? What else are they supposed to wear?? And then "I love it when you fight over me, honey" you got some balls huh, billy" like bruh 😭, I don't mind such dialogues but when you're about to die in 7 days that's not how I expect the characters to talk.
— Sep 20, 2026 10:15PM
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