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None of these scenes feel necessary to the plot and feel like they could’ve been trimmed down to 50 pages tops. I’m starting to skim…
— Jan 29, 2025 12:09AM
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Feb 06, 2025 06:30AM
Has it picked up yet?
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Yeah thankfully but is it worth it? Debatable. 310/527 being pointless isn’t and tbd if the ending is what I want or need.