Paul (Life In The Slow Lane)’s Reviews > Tomorrow's Flight > Status Update

Good story. Poor writing.

Uh oh. Sloppy, unedited writing starting to appear. And in the Cretaceous period, the stars might have been brighter at night, but they weren't bigger...or closer. Dumb!

Yay! This has three of my favourite subjects: Time Travel, Dinosaurs and Air Crash Investigation.