Starlight’s Reviews > Brianna > Status Update

Since I’ll be rerating this the lowest I can
I’ll also have to add it to my “memorable’ shelf

As well as cheating shelf
Bc I def count those handful of scenes as cheating
Fucking shithead of an mmc.

Seriously though
Poor sheala and sosha.
Poor ban.

Which is why..

I’ll prob do a new thing where I rewrite stories…
Not even for the intention of publishing them obviously

But for my own peace of mind

I’m certain I can write a better story
And finish it while I’m at it

Give Ban his book, love and romance and twins.
Bring the dols and orcs back.
Castrate the rapists.

Forget brianna and char
.

Eugh

^and this reread was shit.

It gets more awful every reread. And this was like my fifth or sixth (generally guessing) reread.

Ughhhhh
I will never get over the fact that the idea is an be so good, but shitty writing and storytelling ruins it.

Sheala
Sosha
And Eliana

All those poor women…

The topic of rape is absolutely terrible.
And I’ve said it already, but this author did a truly shitty job of addressing it. Of writing about it.

I feel sick and gross rn bc of all the cliffhangers
The injustice of it all

.

Idk what I rated this book before
Prob two or three stars
Now I’m changing it to one star…solely bc it was so poorly written

Not even tempted to reread Sheala, or Meri or that Xmas book

Bc I just checked and this author still has not made or published any new books for this series
Despite having an empty link and titled book for om assuming, one of those medirian assassin lady guards.

No book for Ban.
Ugh.

No resolution to these dols and orcs story plot.

I don’t recall if bakom gets punished in shealas’ book either…

The only excuse this has is having been written and published in 2004.

Literally before iPhones were a thing
And the world building was creative.

If only the execution was better.

If only the main characters were better actually..

And that godawful cover photo
Every time I see it I want to hurl.

I forgot how this ended
So that was lame

No epilogue either

Just that quick “court” or trial scene … where they just have guards drag that shitty Bakom character away…THATS IT???? I could’ve sworn he was torn to shreds by the guy…ugh.

So fucking lame 😒

^and not give a single fuck about consequences for torturing and killing anyone that is stupid enough to even try pulling this bullshit

A fuck with us and die attitude
Motto maybe

Oh yeah another very important thought I just remembered

The awful shit in this book has inspired me to write a story where the aliens in the story do awful shit and try to do awful shit to the MCs

Try.

I want to write about an alien species where they dare them to try to do some bullshit like that and get their asses literally handed to them.

I want them to fucking be powerfully for once

^i know for sure that their punishment isn’t enough.

Certainly not enough at all.

I need a good torture and death scene for the bad guys for once.

I’ve yet to read a satisfying one lately or any that I can recall atm.
Even ones that claim to be darker genres..

Truly disappointing. And disheartening that not even a fictional story and world will give justice and vengeance to those who deserve it.