Amanda’s Reviews > Hunt on Dark Waters > Status Update

This is a joke. I was told so many things about how spicy and good the authors books were, and all I can think is that I definitely wrote better sex in fanfic than this professional published novel. I'm very worried about Neon Gods waiting on my shelf...

This is dry as kindling yet there's no spark with our leads. Honestly, it's reading like bad fanfiction with the serial numbers filed off. Dialogue is wooden and the banter is flat. We keep getting told how they find each other hot but I don't feel anything like chemistry. It's contrived and tiresome. Not sure I'm going to get through this one.

I decided on lighter, fun reading for the second read of 2025. Let's go pirate ships!