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Fredegar Bolger
is 57% done
I still have no idea what is going on. There is a lack of clarity here. Endless conversations with blurry context. 57% through and I don't know what the plot is! What do each of these 100 billion different characters want? I keep believing reading more will clear things up.. Not helping.
— Jun 23, 2016 03:06PM
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Fredegar Bolger
is 38% done
Dialogue from chapter 9 summed up my feelings so far. One asked the other: "What’s going on?"
Sadly, I responded: "No idea."
I'm sick of reading about lips brushing things. I'm sick of over-sensualised characters. I did not sign up to read about furries! New characters introduced every few pages. Stop! too many.
Will keep reading.. but there is a lot of redeeming to be done!
— Jun 08, 2016 05:05PM
Sadly, I responded: "No idea."
I'm sick of reading about lips brushing things. I'm sick of over-sensualised characters. I did not sign up to read about furries! New characters introduced every few pages. Stop! too many.
Will keep reading.. but there is a lot of redeeming to be done!
Fredegar Bolger
is 18% done
Good prose & good humor. I'm enjoying this. LOTs of characters and I'm having trouble distinguishing them all. Excellent dialogue marred by missing pronouns. Don't know who's talking! Imaginos, I hope, will reappear soon; opening scene was excellent, but haven't seen him since. Mash-up of cyberpunk, kill bill, Jessica Jones & Spinal Tap for measure.
— Jun 04, 2016 05:22PM
