Jen swoons...’s Reviews > The Laird's Guardian Angel > Status Update
Jen swoons...
is 52% done
And the h is written so juvenile and immature and it’s not coming across well. Ah well, sometimes authors have duds
— Feb 09, 2025 02:02PM
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Jen swoons...
is 71% done
I usually like EK. I’m not sure of this was rushed or what. I recommend other things by her but this one is definitely one to pass. Sorry EK - but this story is not the essence of your writing - storywise, character-wise, or editing. I would dnf if it wasn’t an author whose other stories I like. 2 stars
— Feb 10, 2025 08:09PM
Jen swoons...
is 60% done
You mean to tell me the h can run for hours keeping up with horses? and climb trees and that an army of warriors couldn’t find her. Yeah this is going to be a 2.
— Feb 09, 2025 08:19PM
Jen swoons...
is 55% done
Weird that goodreads erased my update from 33%. The H and h don’t meet until then and they’ve hardly had interaction at 55%. This is probably a 2 or 3 at this point. But I’ve only about 98 pages to go so just going to finish.
— Feb 09, 2025 02:16PM
Jen swoons...
is 51% done
H and h have barely met yet. EK - sown series are awesome. Thai series book 2 was good. Book 3 not so much so far. I have a feeling this will be rushed since there’s not much to go on yet.
— Feb 09, 2025 01:47PM
Jen swoons...
is 34% done
First meeting between H and h at 33% is kind of late in the story. She’s a good author though so can probably make it work but I hope it’s not rushed
— Feb 09, 2025 07:06AM

