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"Already ripening barberries grow red," has two amazing stanzas and one okay one.

"The sovereigns of the world are old" is pretty good

"The light shouts in your tree-top, and the face" is really good

"The first word that you ever spoke was: light."

Please read these aloud, if you do

"I am, you anxious one. Do you not hear me" is among the best poems I have read