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Ariel
Ariel is 26% done
The phrase, "hurry up and wait" has come to mind often with this story. It tries to savor every detail, but rushes the big moments. I feel the world mechanics are over explained at this point as well. It makes me feels stuck.
Feb 10, 2025 07:21PM
Star Found (Path of the Stars, #1)

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Ariel
Ariel is 91% done
“It is all in here. You just need to be brave enough to harness it, to accept the truth. Let go of the past Evie, it no longer serves you.”
Feb 12, 2025 10:55PM
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Ariel
Ariel is 81% done
Dearest child. What happened to me was—horrendous. But it gave me you.
Feb 12, 2025 10:12PM
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Ariel
Ariel is 65% done
I wish I could be the man my mother wanted, the man you need me to be, but I have started down a path of darkness I don’t know how to escape—or even if I want to.
Feb 11, 2025 03:22AM
Star Found (Path of the Stars, #1)


Ariel
Ariel is 37% done
To not be alone. To pretend she was accepted, loved even. Even if it was just a fantasy she replayed in her mind.
Feb 10, 2025 09:20PM
Star Found (Path of the Stars, #1)


Ariel
Ariel is 31% done
There was a timelessness to Miranda’s pain and suffering. A depth Evie had never experienced before.
Feb 10, 2025 08:49PM
Star Found (Path of the Stars, #1)


Ariel
Ariel is 17% done
Do not discount the family you gain in your travels. We may not be born of the same womb, but we love you no less.
Feb 09, 2025 04:12AM
Star Found (Path of the Stars, #1)


Ariel
Ariel is 4% done
All around her, the night felt alive in its waking darkness.
Feb 09, 2025 01:46AM
Star Found (Path of the Stars, #1)


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